a mouse would call it "castle"

Photography \ Architecture | 04/02/08 @016 | Phryneas | critiques (11) | views (223)

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2008/03/30
Nikon D70 with 35-70/2.8

focal length: 40mm
exposure: 1/50s
f-number: 2.8

processing in capture one and gimp

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moserArtist

04/02/08 @239

Nice concept!

Lowest section of "wood" versis "wall" does not look straight. Looks like it is leaning towards the right all together.

You seem to need to push the contrast slightly.

The details and clarity in the texture seems not to be spot on.
The sharpness must be perfect on these types of compositions imo.

I would possibly have gone for a higher aparture on this one.

MsMichelleLynn

04/02/08 @435

Nice textures and composition Lenz. It's unfortunate that the stone in the foreground is out of focus. The horizontal section of wood to the left is also a bit blurred. The image would benefit from a push of brightness and contrast. A tripod and narrower aperture would solve the focus problem.

ersen-t

04/02/08 @707

nice shot.
the textures are great.

Daykan

04/02/08 @717

Really good!! Composition are really nice! Textures in the wood are great!

NiasHZed

04/03/08 @523

very nice compositon

workster

04/04/08 @126

Nice concept and composition. I agree with moserArtist that the focus and sharpness are important for this type of photo and they are a little off.

blackshad

04/05/08 @704

i agree mainly with Moser Artist

nice try +7

Madanapale

04/07/08 @716

Beautiful composition and very nice concept!
I would use a smaller aperture (Larger F) and a tripod.....to get crisp details all over, but just my taste.
Good work Lenz!
Glad to see you back!
Carlos

rimete

04/15/08 @330

There isn't much that I would change, maybe upping the lightsa little bit but otherwise - great!

cupcake

04/20/08 @693

Good idea.
I agree about the aperture.

pgarnet05

04/23/08 @898

great and fun concept =)

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