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one more of the flower photos, I had a hard deal with the white balance of this one as I had to chose between plain reality and the expression of how I feel the colours - I hope I found the right balance.
also, the balance between dark areas and subject is quite a problem for me as well, so if anyone has suggestions on that...

sorry that I have fallen a bit back with commenting on all your works but I'm I'm quite busy at the moment

ah, yes, critique is of course always very appreciated

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camera: Nikon D70
ISO-speed: ISO 200
shutter speed: 1/8000 sec
f-number: F/10
focal length: 70mm (~105mm)
external flash (it was a Metz, don't ask me what one - just borrowed it for that day as I can't use my own flash external yet (will receive a cable for that soon ))
full manual
 
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Avatar dizzi

 02/22/05 @756

cool dots and contrast lines!
great dark contrasted picture!
Good work, Lenz!
 
Avatar Morre

 02/22/05 @782

Another good one there, Phryneas.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 02/22/05 @842

"The Phryneas touch".....Great mood....I like the balance...the whites on the purple flower balance the picture very well...The flower at the left adds a very special touch to the mood....the black backgound is excellent...I am glad to see another one from you...Max points....Excellent Lenz.
 
Avatar Abstractor

 02/22/05 @912

Well done Lenz, Good work as always. Beautiful shot.

keith
 
Avatar Fooxoo

 02/22/05 @913

Hmmm... wonderful colours, beautiful contrast, good sharpness. But what i love the most in this photo is the flower which is in the shadow. Looks mighty fine.
 
Avatar gravy

 02/22/05 @947

i love flowers! flowers are awesome!
 
Avatar Inabottle

 02/23/05 @014

Great capture... very beautiful, and the colors are fantastic
 
Avatar ohce

 02/23/05 @038

hey... it's orchid~
hmm..... i think you have get the balance you want.... but for me, it's a little dark.... is this shooting indoor?
 
Avatar Madilynnn

 02/23/05 @165

Ooo, love the texture and details on this one! Great colors too... love the purples. My favorite! Great composition.

- Rene
 
Avatar eremita

 02/23/05 @238

Incredible texture with very interesting lighting.... Beautiful Colors, very creative work!
 
Avatar maytree

 02/23/05 @481

much better than your recent work "pink". close up and good composition.
 
Avatar Dax

 02/23/05 @607

There's an unusual colors' combination in this shot...
but it works very well in this case! Wonderful spotted orchid!
 
Avatar eowyn

 02/23/05 @649

very breath taking I might say...
beauty is definately here....
 
Avatar exitium2000

 02/25/05 @722

I think you did quite well wiht the white balance, colours seem good to me. Say what RAW converter do you use? some have finer white balance tuning than others...

I can't really comment about darkness..as I calibrated my monitor etc.. so I have no idea what it looks like on yours...but in photoshop CS..I find the shadows/hihglights adjustment tool amazing..basically tones down crazy highlights and opens up shadows quite a bit...

as well..many people are saying that the D70 slightly underexposes..something to do with the curves and saving hihglights from blowing out... lots of custom curves one can download..I have set my exposure compensation to +0.3 as default, and it seems to be working out pretty good,,,and to keep hihglights from blowing out because of that, I shoot ont he lowest contrast setting...sure it looks like hell most of the time..but works well in post production..

anyways..knowing you..you already knew all of this :)
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 02/26/05 @509

Very nice Lenz. I enjoy black backgrounds in flower photography. I think this might work better if the flower was cropped lower and more to the right. Also, there's a tiny white speck showing in my monitor in the middle left of the photo which is a part of the background flower but is a little distracting.

Nevertheless, very well done. Good work!
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 02/26/05 @991

Very nice shot Lenz. The black background suits this well. I think lightning the flowers just a bit might improve the shot even more. I agree with exitium, the shadows/highlight tool in PS might do the trick. I respect your choices though, you know what was intended here :)
 
Avatar eduardobedoya

 03/04/05 @654

Nice shot
that purple really impressive
n that shapes n moods.
just beautifull.
 
Avatar windandfire

 03/04/05 @761

The balance is incredibly perfect, Lenz. Looks like a clear reflection.........I love the work you've done on the right...........
Brilliant work, Lenz!!!!!!
+10
 
mikachu

 03/15/05 @915

briliant, i like to feel this flowers :) (http://www.icq.com/friendship/pages/browse_page_18968.php)
 
Avatar ARTOONATOR

 03/28/05 @860

It breathes darkness...poison...and yet it's beautifull.
Good job!
 
inamraja

 04/07/06 @631

SEXY
 
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